Tuesday, January 8, 2008


Now he holds on to the bangle
Till he is fast asleep.
(Much better than a fistful of hair-
His antics to ensure I am there...)



feddabonn said...

very tender first two lines. even the third is good. the last line, however...

The Tentacles of Thought said...

Nah i dnt find any problm with it....nicely done