Friday, January 18, 2008

A morsel of me

A morsel of me,
A bite of you. What a clutter
A fight can do...

-GG

3 comments:

feddabonn said...

nice. though the words belie it, the tone feels lighthearted, somehow. is it the rhythym that gives it that?

Gauri Gharpure said...

yes, there's sharp contrast b/w the words and the theme the rhyme gives it.. but that's exactly how it's meant to be, am glad the rhythm lends it the feel I wanted to convey.. :)

dharmabum said...

good one. serious stuff, but told in a light mood or some such thing. never been the poetry kind myself :P