A morsel of me,
A bite of you. What a clutter
A fight can do...
-GG
Friday, January 18, 2008
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3 comments:
nice. though the words belie it, the tone feels lighthearted, somehow. is it the rhythym that gives it that?
yes, there's sharp contrast b/w the words and the theme the rhyme gives it.. but that's exactly how it's meant to be, am glad the rhythm lends it the feel I wanted to convey.. :)
good one. serious stuff, but told in a light mood or some such thing. never been the poetry kind myself :P
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