Friday, October 17, 2008

Nibbling

It slowly eats away,
bits of my intestine, heart and veins
but most of it, my brain...

Anger, which part of me
did you nibble today?

--Gauri

15 comments:

Art and Poetry said...

Nice one and so true! I find it is very easy to get angry with my computer.

Diana said...

Hiii...first time to ur blog....I hav always loved anything related to Haiku...

As per ur title.....this post is really sweet.

YogaforCynics said...

Oh yes...I know that nibbling all too well...especially these days...

neilina said...

Oh! This is just lovely. Many people don't realise this.....may be they like nibbles.

Dileep said...

ha ha...love you for this post :)

I liked it very much!

magiceye said...

yes... anger can be so destructive..

Vinz aka Vinu said...

nice one...
anger always eats you...partially and at times wholly

:)

Gauri Gharpure said...

Nick--- Yes-- my comp is behaving pretty awful too. :) So much so tht i have stopped gritting my teeth and focus on other pettier things to fuss abt. :D

Diana--- Welcome! keep coming back

Dr-- Welcome! It eats up everyone of us... How helpless we feel at such times

Neilina-- Thanks.. :) I loved the post you recently wrote on the lines of our self-image and perceptions...

Dileep-- :).
Your poem, precisely the two lines on hibiscus flowers made my day. Wonderful!

Magic Eye--- Welcome to the blog... Yes, anger kills slowly. Just like pollution or smoke or sorrow...But then, like the rest, lesser mortals cannot help it..

Vinu-- Welcome-- Thanks for appreciating the lines. Be back soon..

Dileep said...

Hello Gauri,

Thanks for the comments :)

But your poetry is wonderful :)

continue writing so many things :)

dharmabum said...

such a disease it is, anger, and always leaves impulsive folks like me in a mood of regret. yet, i have always felt it a useful tool too - if used appropriately. get angry, but don't get affected by it.

Anonymous said...

wow!!!

Vetrimagal said...

beautiful!

SRI GANESH.M ♪♥ said...

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Gauri Gharpure said...

Dharma-- Talk abt anger and being impulsive-- regretful combination. I eat when I am angry, nothing else helps, except sleep, maybe :)

Anonynmous-- Wow!! not often that I get mysterious visitors like you. You made my day, yay! ha ha ha... be back soon... and thnks so much!

Vetrimagal-- Hi, welcome to the blog, thnks a lot. what does ur ID mean? I visited your blog, but it's in a script that I cannot understand. be back.

Sri Ganesh--- THANKS--- I didn't know the prob even existed till u pointed it out. I have made the necessary changes.. I ws on your blog for a very brief while, but really loved some graphics (tht i assume u have made) the tree one, with a few other objects ws cheerful, very interesting..

mesjay said...

This is short, bitter-sweet, wise and poetic.